What do you think of my poem? I'd love to see peoples interpretations of it.?

it is absolutely amazing...i could almost picture it going on in my head...it reminds me a lot of that phrase that says "a dance with the devil might last you forever" ...it's like you get one taste of it and thats it you're lost in that realm forever and you just keep on dancing with it in your soulless misery...i can vividly picture a girl with a cold, expressionless face twirling around a skeleton with a black robe over and over in a dark setting...amazing...kudos